At least a list. InNaPoWriMo Day 30

Fer y Ric Alemania 2001 108Still hands

rest on the keyboard



wait for instructions

emerge and write

at least

a list.


Stop the flow,

get up

heat water

grab mate


brown sugar

at least

a list.


Back on my butt

searching the guts


Deva Premal

Gayatri Mantra

India… Ah! Here it comes!

al least

a list.


Remember my love,

remember when we met?

Whitefield morning.

Scented air.

Saraswathi Goddess.

Handcrafted Destiny.

at least

a list.


You thought I was so vain

(you are always right).

I thought you were out of your mind

(I wasn’t that right, I never am).

We crashed in the bad way

scattered glints

turned round

faded away.


Soft and tumultuously

sparks from your spirit

light my sari as a river

an irrepressible force

an impetuous course

unfolded nature

man and woman

reaching our central core.


Not enough poems, no praise, no song,

no, are not enough to express my love.

laughter above pain / you, funny cow

trust beyond anger / you, wise cow

compassion over pride / you, guru cow

respect built and re-found / you, seeker cow

At least a list, dear husband,

Minimal remembrances of pure delight.










3 thoughts on “At least a list. InNaPoWriMo Day 30

  1. Ricardo Cavalli says:

    I´ve never expected you writting about us! I´m shocked….and moved I must admit. Love you, our love is a miracle from our beloved indeed.


  2. tempestletrope says:

    This was beautiful and fun, like walking on a path and finding delightful things along the way. Glad you found someone to share your life with this way. 🙂
    I’m visiting from the NaPoWriMo list. My team’s site is Poetry of the Netherworld.


    • Lic. María Raiti says:

      Hi! What a lovely way to express your feeling! Thank you for visiting and taking the time to leave your comment. I wento over to your team´s site! You are a whole bunch of really creative people!!! Thank you for the link, love, Fernanda


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